Along the Old River the shrimp boats unloaded. A battered white envelope drifted in the breeze. Bored, I picked it up. Something interesting?
“Dave” was the only address. I opened it.
“Dear Dave” it began. Would Dave clean up his act if he read the list of his shortcomings?
Nah.
Good job! I think you got your point across….I love your header picture!
That was good! Very creative.